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[Read Kindle] é Fallen Elemental (Evelyn Storm, #1) µ I thought I was human I thought I could finish school, leave my abusive parents and my old life behind I was wrong I m an elemental and I can use not just one element but all of them That s not all though, I can control lightning No elemental is able to control lightning but I m not just any elemental A prophecy has marked me as the ultimate power. no lo se, ese final fue muy espeluznante y me desilusiono un poco ltimamente no soporto la injusticia aunque sea ficticia y cuando todo pod a mejorar no fue justo ese final. one word yikes in some places of this book Fallen Elemental is a RH book that definitely makes you question a lot of things happening in it Like for example, why women are basically put on this earth to pop out babies We aren t a vending machine people so stop thinking that Until the day a female gives birth to a damn can of coke calm your tits In this book, you will meet Evie She s an interesting character because she sort of lives a life where a typical RH book goes She was abused at home, basically outcast in life, and she somehow gains magical powers one day Throughout the book, she actually finds out that people in her life are bat shit crazy She also learns about a lot of secrets that have been kept from her So, to say she deserves to get mad or throw a tantrum or two is the least she can do She could go off and murder the people that betrayed her in a way but she doesn t Besides all of that, the romance in this book definitely gave me some questions Never in my life of reading RH books have I questioned how the other people in this little circle feel when they are watching someone with their girl Even if they are all bonded and shit this book kind of made me cringe at points and question myself Like how are they feeling Are they okay with this happening Do you think they are all critiquing the shit out of one another Possibly giving some pointers Maybe writing a yelp review or two on them WHO KNOWS but that s what I was thinkin while reading some of these scenes.They were hot don t get me wrong but my mind went down a dark path in this one.Overall, it was entertaining enough but I still have some unanswered questions My buddy told me that the author could be rewriting books 2 and 3 so I might have to wait to dive into them until then.
This is an update to my original review which is still below I wanted to add a couple stars after the edit revisions It is much improved although it still has too many errors I also applaud the book being added to KU Mistakes are much forgivable when you don t have to look at a book s sticker price I still maintain that the actual story and characters are wonderful WOW This book was definitely not a bad idea not terribly original, but a good concept It was very poorly executed It is in severe need of proofreading and editing There is hardly a page without typos And yet that s still not the worst of it I think the author would benefit from a writing class complete with grammar and spelling rules I am truly trying to be helpful, not mean There are so many cases of run on sentences, incorrect grammar, and incorrect word usage in general that it s distracting The sames mistakes are repeated throughout the book, so I don t think it was only poor editing Even though the pages were labelled by character, when conversations started up, the speakers would change, going back and forth within a paragraph, sometimes within a run on sentence, so that it was confusing All basic writing rules were ignored to the detriment of the book Enough of the criticism The story has potential and the characters are engaging With quite a bit of polish this could be a good series I wish I could read the follow up book, because I am interested to know what happens next, but I can t pay for another low quality book I would be than happy to review it, even help edit it, but I can say that this book definitely wasn t worth the listed price. Evie is an outcast at school, abused at home, and has weird things happen in her presence like electrocuting a babysitter trying to molest her with her hands When four new hunky guys show up at school, she figures it will only increase the taunting she receives, but instead, they immediately form a friendship with her Turn out, they were sent by the Elemental Council to find her Of course, when they do, they determine that Evie is even special than they were told, but they have to convince her of that.I read the rewritten version of this book and can only imagine what it was like originally Nothing about it made me feel good or bad There were parts I thought were stupid and parts I liked, but overall I was pretty neutral on what I was reading, except for one part at the end when view spoiler I might have thrown up in my mouth a little when her dad told her that her purpose was to repopulate the earth Evie thought she was going to be a badass savior warrior, but nope broodmare hide spoiler